my city
hallo, i am from georgia, live in tbilisi. tbilisis is the capirtal city , it isn't large but is nook. there is river ,,mtkvari" wich devided citys at two part. on thet left coast lived principality people, right coast lived peasantry, it is laggand and now had no reason your home is right or left . there is old tbilisi on the left coast and if you like antiwuity you must go there. there is nariyala( fortress) , sulphury wother, botanical garden and atc. there is all new in right coast. i lave my city, it's my tbilisi , it's my pride. like to wolk on streets, like to eat ,,xinkali" and like aroma. yes there is special aroma in my city and this aroma is known only for me. i live in left coast and i am peasant. :D
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Hello, I am from Georgia, I live in Tbilisi. Tbilisis is the capital city, it isn't large but it is nook? (nice). There is a river the ,,mtkvari" which divides the city into two parts. On the left bank live the rich people and on the right bank live the peasants, it is a legend and now it doesn't matter if your home is on the right or the left . There is old Tbilisi on the left bank and if you like antiquity you must go there. There is a fortress called Nariyala, sulphur water springs, botanical gardens, etc. It is all new on the right bank. I love my city, it's my Tbilisi, it's my pride. I like to walk down the streets, like to eat ,,Xinkali" and I like the aroma. Yes there is special aroma in my city and this aroma is known only to me. I live on the left bank and I am a peasant. :DHello Ani,
This is a really interesting text about your city, I learned a lot!
There are lots of corrections but many of them are for repeated errors and spelling. The most important things to learn at the moment are that 'I' in front of a verb is always a capital (big) 'I' and proper names, like Bob, Ani, Tbilisi, Georgia always begin with a capital letter. The coast is a piece of land which is next to the sea, we use the word 'bank' for the sides of a river.
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my city
hallo, i am from georgia, live in tbilisi. tbilisis is the capital city , it isn't large but is nook. there is river ,,mtkvari" wich devided citys at two part. on thet left coast lived principality people, right coast lived peasantry, it is laggand and now had no reason your home is right or left . there is old tbilisi on the left coast and if you like antiwuity you must go there. there is nariyala( fortress) , sulphury wother, botanical garden and atc. there is all new in right coast. i lave my city, it's my tbilisi , it's my pride. like to wolk on streets, like to eat ,,xinkali" and like aroma. yes there is special aroma in my city and this aroma is known only for me. i live in left coast and i am peasant. :D0
my city
hallo, i am from georgia, live in tbilisi. tbilisis is the capirtal city , it isn't large but is nook. there is river ,,mtkvari" wich devided citys at two part. on thet left coast lived principality people, right coast lived peasantry, it is laggand and now had no reason your home is right or left . there is old tbilisi on the left coast and if you like antiwuity you must go there. there is nariyala( fortress) , sulphury wother, botanical garden and atc. there is all new in right coast. i love my city, it's my tbilisi , it's my pride. like to wolk on streets, like to eat ,,xinkali" and like aroma. yes there is special aroma in my city and this aroma is known only for me. i live in left coast and i am peasant. :D
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