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The umbrella man was an elderly person in his late seventies. This He was a short man of low height. As a result of the fact that he was His advanced in years adding to his small stature, his appearance was the one of a feeble, frail man.

The umbrella man had a face or rosy complexión and wrinkled skin. Apart from this, He also had a very thin moustache and thick fair eyebrows. The tiny man, who was wearing fine clothes and carrying an expensive silk umbrella, gave the impression of being a rich man.

As With regards to his personality, this clever character, seemed not only well-mannered but also very friendly. This impression is the result of came from his proper use of language. On the contrary However, he was not a gentleman, but a smart trickster of with a corrupted morality.

Wow great description Luna, I can really imagine this man!  I want to know more about him!

Is this description ok?

The umbrella man was an elderly person in his late seventies. This He was a short man of low height. As a result of the fact that he was advanced in years added to His small stature, his made him  appear a feeble, frail man. The umbrella man had a face or that was a rosy complexión and he had wrinkled skin. Apart from this, he also had a very thin moustache and thick fair(ligth coloured?) eyebrows. The tiny man,who was wearing fine clothes and an expensive silk umbrella , gave the impression of being a rich man.
As In regards his personality, this clever character,seemed not only wel-mannered but also very friendly. This impression is was the result of his proper use of language.(Maybe: One would get this impression because he was very articulate <or well-spoken>). On the contrary, he was not a gentleman but a smart trickster of corrupted morality.

Very good descriptive paragraph Luna.

I would love to help you to improve your English writing skills.

Shawn

The umbrella man was an elderly person in his late seventies. This He was a short man of low height. As a result of Because of his small stature, and the fact that he was advanced in years, added to his small stature, his he had the appareance was the one of a feeble, frail man. The umbrella man had a face or rosy complexión complexion and wrinkled skin. Apart from this, he also had a very thin moustache and thick, fair eyebrows. The tiny man, who was weating wearing fine clothes and holding an expensive silk umbrella, gave the impression of being a rich man.
As regards to Regarding his personality, this clever character, seemed not only well-mannered but also very friendly. This impression is the result of his proper use of language. On the contrary, he was not a gentleman, but a smart clever trickster of corrupted morality with corrupt morals.