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could anybody correct me, please? “The way up to heaven” is a story about an affluent elderly couple who lived in New York City. Mr Foster and Mrs Foster had been married for more tan thirty years and the woman had always been not only and obedient but also a devoted wife. Apart from this, the Fosters had an only child living in Paris with her husband and three children. Though Mrs Foster had never seen the chidren, she loved them deeply. The old woman desired to live with them. The wife had a pathological fear of being late while her husband seemed to enjoy making her feel nervous because he used to delay the poor woman any time she had to go out. This attitude was something that Mrs Foster suspected from. On this particular occasion Mrs Foster was going to visit her daughter. Before leaving Mr Foster tormented his wife by making her wait for him. Later, as a consequence of the foggy day, the flight was postponed until the next day. After had been given the bad news, Mrs Foster took a taxi in order to get back home for the night. The next morning she was ready to depart. Previous to going to take the flight, she would have to drop her husband at his club, although it was not on her way to the airport. Once in the car he pretended having forgotten a gift for his daughter and entered the house since he wanted to look for it. A moment after, the woman found the gift in the car and went to tell Mr Foster that she had the present, but before getting into the house she stopped, straining to hear something. Then she rushed to the car and ordered the driver to make the way to the airport. Mrs Foster made her flight and had a wonderful visit. Finally, she returned home and entered the six-stored house where noticed a peculiar odour. Satisfied, she phoned the elevator repairman because it was out of order. Mrs Foster had let her husband to die in the stucked lift.

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“The way up to heaven” is a story about an affluent elderly couple who lived in New York City. Mr. Foster and Mrs. Foster had been married for more than thirty years, and the woman had always been not only and obedient but also a devoted wife. Apart from this, the Fosters had an only child living in Paris with her husband and three children. Though Mrs Foster had never seen the chidren, she loved them deeply. The old woman desired to live with them.
The wife had a pathological fear of being late, while her husband seemed to enjoy making her feel nervous because he used to delay the poor woman any time she had to go out. This attitude was something that Mrs Foster suspected from. From what? I didn't understand what you meant to say in this sentence.
On this particular occasion Mrs Foster was going to visit her daughter. Before leaving, Mr Foster tormented his wife by making her wait for him. Later, as a consequence of the foggy weather, day, the flight was postponed until the next day. After had been given the bad news, Mrs Foster took a taxi in order to get back home for the night.
The next morning she was ready to depart. Previous to Before going to take leaving for her the flight, she would have had to drop her husband at his club, although even though it was not on her way to the airport. Once in the car he pretended having to have forgotten a gift for his daughter and entered the house since he wanted went into the house to look for it. A moment after later, the woman found the gift in the car and went to tell Mr Foster that she had the present, but before getting into the house she stopped, straining to hear something. Then she rushed to the car and ordered the driver to make the his way to the airport.
Mrs Foster made her flight and had a wonderful visit. Finally, she returned home and entered the six-storied house where noticed a peculiar odour. Satisfied, she phoned the elevator repairman because it was out of order. Mrs Foster let left her husband to die in the stucked broken lift.

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