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About my trip.
It was a family trip, we had there were five of us. It was a river trip by the using inflatable kayaks for 7 days.
At first I thought it we would be using a 6-seater cataraft (we have it), but later we decided to use two 3-seaters inflatable kayaks. We floated down the Agidel river. It is a mountain river in Ural.
Most of the time weather was good - sunny and warm, and the water was warm too. We swam every day. But two times twice it was very rainy with hail and thunder. When we finished our trip by on the river we went to Samara (city) for 4 days.
Now When I and my sister my sister and I live in separately from our parents leave our parents home and have jobs, this way it is it will be more difficult than before for our family to get together for so long time. spend as much time together.
Sounds like you had a great family holiday, good article!
Louise's corrections are great - but I'd suggest that the last sentence is about the present. It would then be, perhaps:
Now that my sister and I live in separately from our parents and have jobs, this way it is more difficult than before to get together for such a long time.
Or, slightly differently:
Now_my sister and I live separately from our parents and have jobs, so it is more difficult и т.д.
I'd say the first is better.
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