Presentation.

Hello, my name is Vera. I was born in Rio and lived there throughout my childhood. I studied there and have many fond memories of Rio.
When I was a teenager I moved to Santa Catarina. I made good friends in adolescence.
Was approved in a public contest and am now ( or now i'm )a public servant.
And you? Where were you you were born?
Where you spent childhood and adolescence?
In does your country has tender to employ staff?
It's Is it  good to be a public servant there?

Good effort...Happy learning :)

Presentation.

Hello, my name is Vera.

I was born in Rio and lived there throughout my childhood. I studied there and have many fond memories of Rio.
When I was a teenager I moved to Santa Catarina. I made good friends in my adolescence.
I was approved took part in a public contest and now I am a public servant.
And you? Where were you born?
Where did you spend your childhood and adolescence?
Does your country has have a tendering process to employ staff?
It's  Is it good to be a public servant there?

Thanks in advance for suggestions and corrections.