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Vampire diary I have watched over <Vampire diary> today. Everyone in it was very special. they all have their own special characters. Elana is very kind, so she have many good friends. They can in spite of their own life to protect her. Bonnie is an angel. She always consider others first. Everytime when they were in trouble, she always can find a good way to save them. Caroline always can find others advantages, she is sunny frank and casual, she never cover up herself's emotion. Stefan is very gentle, he respect every decision that Elana made, that's him way to love Elana. On the contrary, Damon be willing to do everything as long as can protect Elana, for example Matt and Elana both in dangers, Elana asked to save Matt, Stefan will save Matt, but Damon won't, he will save Elana without hesitation. That's him way to love Elana. Katherine is also a leading actor too. she is very crafty she had done very bad things, she is selfish, she only care about herself , but in the end she came back for her daugther. She love Stefan, but Stefan never love her. In the end she was hoisted by her own petard. It's very sad.

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Vampire diary

I watched <Vampire diary> today. Everyone in it was very special. They all have their own special characters. Elana is very kind, so she has many good friends. They risk their lives to protect her. Bonnie is an angel. She always considers others first. Everytime they are in trouble, she can always find a good way to save them. Caroline can always find others advantages, she is sunny, frank and casual, she never covers up her emotions. Stefan is very gentle, he respects every decision that Elana makes, that's his way to love Elana. On the contrary, Damon is willing to do everything to protect Elana, for example if Matt and Elana were both in danger, and Elana asked them to save Matt, Stefan will save Matt, but Damon won't, he will save Elana without hesitation. That's his way to love Elana. Katherine is also a leading actor too. She is very crafty she has done very bad things. She is selfish, and she only cares about herself, but in the end she came back for her daugther. She loves Stefan, but Stefan has never loved her. In the end she was hoisted by her own petard. It's very sad.

 

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has - singular
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are - present tense

were - past tense

 

make - present tense

made - past tense

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