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Hi, my name is Lina, I´m sixteen years old, I love cats, I´m vegetarian because to me, the lives of animals are (las vidas de los animales son) very important, I´m student of High school, I like the languages so much because they are interesting, I wanna study the languages English, German and French, when I finish High school I wanna go to England to learn to communicate me with natives, English is very beautiful but also complicated, I never was in English courses, however. it can be expensive but it´s what I want... England is waiting for me.
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Only other thing, "wanna" es mas coloquial para decir "want to" (como "querer"); se usa popularmente en el ingles, pero, tecnicamente, oficialmente, la palabra no existe. Puedes seguir usarla, pero yo queria segurar que sabes que no es exactamente corecta. :)
Saludos y buenos estudios!
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Hi, my name is Lina, I´m sixteen years old, I love cats, I´m vegetarian because to me the lives of animals are very important, I´m a student of High school, I like the languages so much because they're interesting, I wanna study the languages English, German and French, when I end up at High school I wanna go to England to learn to communicate me with natives, English is very beautiful but also complicated, I never was in English courses, however. it can be expensive but it´s what I want... England waits for me.
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Most English speakers will understand you if you use "wanna", but generally in written English it's more correct to use "want to". "Wanna" could be seen as overly informal. Good job! :)
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