8/14/2014 Story

One day, three individuals arrived at heaven’s entrance. The judge asked the first individual (I deleted a comma here) how many times he had betrayed his wife. The man replied, “three times”. A small car was awarded to him as a means of transportation in the heaven.
The same question was prompted (I would not use prompted here. It's not wrong, but a better word is "asked") to the second person. (Split these sentences apart) This person answered "twice." Again, what you wrote was not wrong, it just sounds strange. Therefore, the judge gifted him a middle-class car.

The judge asked the same question to the third person. This person proudly replied "none." The judge was very pleased with his answer. He patted the man’s shoulder with a smile. Of course, you can image what kind of transportation was granted to this man. It was a luxury car.
One day, the three of them stopped their cars in front of the traffic light. Suddenly, the man in the luxury car cried loudly. The rest of them were stunned. They asked this man why he was crying.
The man answered, “Just now I saw my wife riding on a skate board.”

Please correct my writing, thanks

Overall, very good writing. I rewrote a few phrases to sound smoother.