Hi!!

Hi!!!
I'm currently learning English :).
I'm interested in music, movies, shopping, cooking, sports and everything!! Haha.
I wanna brush up my English on this site!
Thank you for reading!!!

I got the 100tastes beans!! :P
I haven't tried it them though lol.

Note:

Emoticons are fine if you're on a chat site or texting, but if you're writing to improve your English grammar I'd suggest you avoid them, although if you're still a beginner grammar isn't very important early on, what's really important is that you are able to understand and be understood. That's my opinion with foreign language in general. Same thing goes with spelling "though" as "tho". Hope this helped :) がんばて！

Hi !!

Hi !!!
I'm currently learning English :)
I'm interested in music, movies, shopping, cooking, sports everything!! Haha
I want to brush up my English, on this site!
Thank you for reading!!!

I got the every flavor beans!! :P
I haven't tried it though lol

[I know that this has already been corrected, I just wanted to point out that they are "Every flavor beans" and that saying things like 'Haha' and 'wanna' are fine when talking to friends, but not in a serious writing. Good job!]

Hi !!

Hi !!!
I'm currently learning English :)
I'm interested in music, movie, shopping, cooking, sports everything!! Haha
I wanna want to brush up on my English on this site !
Thank you for reading!!!

I got the 100tastes beans!! :P (don't know what that is!)
I haven't tried it yet though lol

"Wanna" isn't good, although I was horrified to see it in a Google translation recently. Very much an Americanism, which will no doubt find its way into the Oxford English Dictionary one day! Fine in texts etc with friends, but it is not an English word.

Other than that, excellent :)