自作小词一首，暂时无题，求心意相通的人取名戴之
路遇君子兰，空手择一支，无心之举伤及枝叶，愧之责之无术救之，暗自神伤捧花垂泪。花零立，叶叹息，若流年倒转，定盼花叶不相离，同生共死直做春泥！
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横批：no zuo no die
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毁与悔
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双音词太多, 明显是白话文词, 但似乎在试图写古词, 不免有点不伦不类.....
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名为 “没事找事”
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