Differences

I have surveyed (found, noticed, observed) that there are a lots of (a lot of, many) differences between Italy and England concerning way of life and culture. In Italy, people tend to be more careful to respectful of the traditions until and they become intransigent (stubborn, obstinate, closed-minded) and not respectful towards some others. In England, they are free (open-minded, nonjudgemental, unprejudiced) and they don't care about stereotypes and fucking cliché. (I prefer "fucking" in front of the verb, such as "they don't fucking care about..." but this makes sense too.) But What (OR this?) it doesn't mean the ethic (principles) and the respect get the absent there (forgotten, ignored), of course it's a fact that England is more open to join the chance and the news!(I don't know what you mean by this?) "Maybe I make mistakes by thinking this" (Maybe I'm wrong, Correct me if I'm wrong), but I have always had this impression about that it. Indeed everybody Everyone must be have the right to live in a fine setting which allows them to convey theirselves themselves lovely and peacefully in the order to achieve the confidence in yourself (themselves).


I would like to know if this text is fluent and not boring and if I made serious mistakes. Finally I would be really glad if someone could tell me how I can make it fluent with synonym too
Thanks for the cooperation

***intransigent is not a word many English-speakers would even know- but good for you! VERY advanced!

Here is how I would write this paragraph:

Differences
I have observed that there are many differences between Italy and England concerning culture and way of life. In Italy, people tend to be more respectful of traditions and they become stubborn, closed-minded and not respectful towards others. In England, they are open-minded and they don't fucking care about stereotypes or clichés. But this doesn't mean principles and respect are forgotten. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I have always had this impression about these differences. Of course, everyone should have the right to live in a setting which allows them to express themselves peacefully and respectfully.

Hope that helps!