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Some e-mails Hi everybody! Today I'd like to practice some e-mails related to (or with?) my work routine. I work in HR and currently I'm in a transfer moment to another company where I'll need to use my English. So, I've just made up some situations I usually deal with. 1) Dear Maria, I've just interviewed the candidate Fabio about whom we talked yesterday. As I thought his experience is totally into (in, adequate) the profile your Company is looking for and he is also open for new career opportunities. However here is one detail he might not be suitable for your position: he's not available for business trips as it's required during the next 3 month. I'd like to know if, even then (so), you'd like to talk with him? ("I'd like to know if you still would like to talk with him?") His CV is attached. Thank you and have a nice week. Sincerely yours, Ekaterina. 2) Dear Maria, Fabio has just called me asking to reschedule his interview with you for the next Wednesday or another day on next week suitable for you. Could it be possible? I'm sorry for noticing you at the last hour. Thank you!

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Some e-mails

Hi everybody!
Today I'd like to practice some e-mails related to (or with?) my work routine.
I work in HR and currently I'm in a transfer moment to another company where I'll need to use my English.
So, I've just made up some situations I usually deal with.

1)
Dear Maria,
I've just interviewed the candidate Fabio, whom we discusssed yesterday.about whom we talked yesterday. As I thought, his experience is totally inadequate for (did you mean negative? or you can say "his experience makes him very qualified and suited for the profile...") into (in, adequate) the profile your Company is looking for and he is also open for new career opportunities. However, there is one factor that might not make him suitable for the roledetail he might not be suitable for your position: he's not available for business trips as it's required during the next 3 months.  
I'd like to know if, even then (so), you'd like to talk with him?
("I'd like to know if you still would like to interview talk with him?") yes, this is correct.

His CV is attached.

Thank you and have a nice week.

Sincerely yours, Yours sincerely (sincerely yours is romantic)
Ekaterina.

2)
Dear Maria,
Fabio has just called me asking to reschedule his interview with you for the next Wednesday or another day on next week that is suitable for you. Could that it be possible?

I'm sorry for noticing you at the last hour. (Did you want to say you did not see the email for an hour? In which case say "I'm sorry I didn't see this email sooner". Or did you want to say you are sorry you did not tell them? In which case say "I'm sorry I didn't notify you sooner". ) 


Thank you! Everything you have written does make sense but the corrections make it sound more natural. 

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