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We can see in that   the picture  the four children. Three girls and a boy, they are sitting    at the table  in the school´s canteen or cafeteria sitting in the table having   eating their lunch, because all  of them are wearing the school uniforms.They are having the dessert.  which is fruit, such as, orange, apple, and grapes. They look  like   happy because they are are laughing,. less   But the first girl in the picture. She is serious and she's is holding a fork and a knive in her hands a fork and a knive. She is trying eat the grapes with cutlery. The other Some children are having   have fruit with   in their hands. That is  why the reason which they are laughing.

Describe game

We can see in that picture four children in the picture. Three girls and a boy. they are in the school´s canteen sitting in the table having their lunch, because all of them are wearing the school uniform.They are having the dessert. fruit, such as, orangeS, appleS and grapes. They look like happy because they are laughing, less the first girl in the picture less so. She is serious and she is holding in her hands a fork and a knive knife. She is trying eat the grapes with cutlery. The other children are having eating fruit with from their hands. That is the reason which they are laughing.

Excellent text and my corrections are more a matter of style. ¡Buen Hecho!

     In this photograph we see four children; three girls and a boy. All of them are wearing school uniforms, so I believe that they are in their school's cafeteria; sitting at a table, and having their lunch. They are enjoying fruits such as oranges, apples and grapes. They look happy, because they are all smiling, except the girl on the left; she has a serious expression, and she is holding a fork and knive. She is trying to eat grapes with cutlery. The other children are eating their fruit with their hands, and that is why they are laughing. 

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Describe game

We can see in that picture four children. Three girls and a boy. they are in the school´s canteen sitting in at the table having their lunch, because all of them are wearing the school uniform.They are having the dessert. fruits, such as, oranges, apples and grapes. They look like happy because they are laughing, less except for the first girl in the picture. She is serious and she is holding a fork and a knive in her hands. She is trying to eat the grapes with cutlery. The other children are having fruit with their hands. That is the reason which they are laughing.

Well done! you should also make us of contractions, for example: "She's" instead of "she is", it's much more common to use the contracted form.

"Look like" is used mainly when you want to establish a resemblance, for example: "He look likes my brother" = "el se parece a mi hermano".

Have a nice day!  :)

Describe the Game

We can see four children in the  that picture four children. Three girls and a boy. They are in the school´s canteen sitting in at the table having their lunch, because all of them are wearing the school uniforms.They are having the dessert,  which is fruit, such as, orange, apple and grapes. They look like happy because they are laughing, less except for the first girl in the picture. She is serious and she is holding in her hands a fork and a knife. She is trying to eat the grapes with cutlery. The other children are having eating their fruit with their hands. That is the reason which they are laughing.