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Love story (Part 5) James told about his work. He`s a director. I listened him very attentively. When us had brought the fragrant coffe I asked with the emotion: To be continued...

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Love story (Part 5)

James told me about his work / James talked about his work. He`s a director [Although, "He was a director" sounds natural because you are telling a story set in the past - even if he might still be a director]. I listened to him very attentively. When they had brought us the fragrant coffee, [Or, if you prefer to avoid 'they': When/Once the fragrant coffee had arrived..."] I asked, with the emotion:


To be continued...

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