The 2nd Summer Youth Olympic Games
It is very happy that the 2nd Summer Youth Olympic Games will be held in our City-Nanjing.
The aquatic sport will be held in Jin Niu Lake.It is my hometown,The government invested to build the subway line named S8.It is very convenience for other towns' people to take it to Jin Niu Lake.
The opening ceremony will be on Aug. 16.There are three days left.
Hoping everything is running well.
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The 2nd Summer Youth Olympic Games
It is very happy (I find this quite weird..."I'm very happy", maybe? Or 'It is very exciting') that the 2nd Summer Youth Olympic Games will be held in our City-Nanjing.
The aquatic sport will be held in Jin Niu Lake, (just a personal correction, there's nothing wrong) my hometown. The government invested to build the subway line named S8. It is very convenient for other towns' people to take it to Jin Niu Lake.
The opening ceremony will be on Aug. 16. There are three days left.
Hoping everything is running well. ("I hope everything will run well" - because it has not happened yet)
Pretty good, just minor corrections. Mind the space after full stops though :)
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