2010/12/16 sunny but freezing
Last Sunday evening,after finishing our delicous dinner,Kohn and I wanted to go outside to have a walk.
We drove to the SHANGHAI SCINCE AND TECHOLOGY MUSEUM.When we were parking in a wast lot,we saw a light brown cat hiding under the nearby car.Kohn turned the light on and off.He just wanted to let the cat run out of here and maybe we could adopt it.But it was still staring at us and did not make any movement.
It was raining at that time.I got off the car and walked to the cat,it was scared by my feet voice.then it sudden run away.
Kohn likes cat,but I pefer dogs. I aways wonder that how does a man like cat so much.Kohn belongs to libra,he likes every mysterious things,may be that is the point.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 9
0
2010/12/16 sunny but freezing
Last Sunday evening,after finishing our delicious dinnerafter a (=sounds better) delicious dinner
,Kohn and I wanted to go outside to have a walk.
We drove to the SHANGHAI SCIENCE AND TECHNOLOGY MUSEUM.
When we were parking in a wast lot
(It is not understood what is a waste lot what did you mean? a parking lot? a dumpster?) ,
we saw a light brown cat hiding under the nearby car. (light can also mean not heavy (light as a feather)
we saw a small/tiny brown cat hiding under a nearby car
Or: under a small light we saw a brown cat hiding under a nearby car.
Kohn turned the light on and off.
He just wanted to let the cat run out of there and maybe we could adopt it .But it was still staring at us and did not make any movement.
It was raining at that time.I got off the car and walked to the cat, it was scared by my feet voice.then it sudden run away.
Although it was raining I got out the car and walked to the cat, the sound of my footsteps scared it and made it run a way.
Kohn likes cat,but I prefer dogs. I aways wondered how /why does a man like cat so much
I always wondered why some people like cats so much.
.Kohn belongs to libra,he likes every mysterious things,may be that is the point.
Kohn is a libra..........................................................may be that's why.
Good work, most of the corrections are only in order for it to sound better.
0
Hehe I don't have any cats at home because my parents won't let me have one, but I still like em they are so cute
0
thank you~you looks like a beautiful cat~ if you dont mind i say so.
0
interesting ~i like cats too
0
hah~Scorpio~it has a saying that Scorpio is the most clever 星座，and iI belongs to leo.
you also like cats? um~have you feed any cats at home?
yeah,here is snowing the day before yeaterday~actually ,i dont like snowing
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
