Day 4 on italki!

Hello,
Today I'll try to write my introduction on Itaki:

"Hi guys, my name's Cristian, I'm 29, a software engineer and I live in Rome. I've signed up on Italki (for) to improve my English. I hope to find a good language partner to make conversation with, and if (it is) possibile I'd like to go out for a beer or a coffee".

How about that?!
Ciao!
Cris

Or you could say "I am a 29 year old software engineer" if you want to keep your age together with your profession.

If this were an official paper or essay I would avoid the short forms (I'll ---> I will, name's ---> name is, I've ---> I have, I'd ---> I would).  Also you would have to say "I am 29 years old".  In a letter to friends this does not matter.

For some reason it is customary to start with a capital letter on the second line, after the greeting line ("Hello," in your case, or "Hello Joe,"), even though it follows a comma.  It does not sound logical but it is customary.

Good job. 

Day 4 on italki!

Hello,

Today I'll try to write my introduction on Itaki:

"Hi guys, my name's Cristian, I'm 29, a software engineer and I live in Rome. I've signed up on Italki to improve my English. I hope to find a good language partner to converse with and, if possibile, to meet up with some day for a beer or a coffee".

How about that?! 

Ciao!

Cris

Complimenti Cris - sei molto in gamba.