"My trip to New York"

"My trip to New York"

I went to New York 3 years ago by air plane.
It was my first trip to America.
I planned the trip by myself.
I was so excited that I wasn't very patient waiting for the departure.
Back then, I didn't have enough money.
If I reserved early, the price of ticket got cheaper.
So I had to reserve a flight to New York as soon as possible.
But It was not very cheap.
Because I went to New York during the summer peak.
I had to pay a lot to buy a round ticket for my trip.
Actually, I went to New York with the deaf who is younger than me.
There are some differences between the hearing and the deaf.
I should have taken care of the difference.
But I didn't know that well then.
Finally, there were some troubles between us.
When I was in trouble, I really wanted to come back to my house.
But we made up well.

"My trip to New York"

"My trip to New York"

I have been to New York (for) 3 years ago by airplane.
It was my first trip to America.
I planned a the  trip by myself.
I was so excited that I couldn't be patient for waiting for the departure.
Back then, I didn't have enough money.
If I reserve early, the price of ticket will be cheaper.
So I had to reserve a flight to New York as soon as possible.
But I it was not so too much cheap because I went to New York during the summer peak.
I had to pay a lot to buy (or get) a round ticket for my trip.
Actually, I went to New York with a deaf person who is younger than me.
There are were some differences between the hearing and the deaf. what I heard about him and how is he acturally.
I should have had to take care of the difference, but I didn't know that well at that time 
But I didn't know that well then.
After a while, there were some troubles between us.
When I was in trouble, I really wanted to come back to my house.
But we made up well.

My trip to New York

"My trip to New York"

I went to New York 3 years ago by airplane.
It was my first trip to America.
I planned the trip by myself.
I was so excited that I couldn't be patient waiting for the departure.
Back then, I didn't have enough money.
If I reserved early, the price of ticket was cheaper.
So I had to reserve a flight to New York as soon as possible.
But I was not so cheap.
Because I went to New York during the summer peak.
I had to pay a lot to buy a round ticket for my trip.
Actually, I went to New York with the a deaf person (or friend) who is younger than me.
There are some differences between the hearing and the deaf.
I should have taken care of known the difference.
But I didn't know that well then.
Finally, there were some troubles between us. ("Finally" does not make sense here. "After a while" could work.)
When I was in trouble, I really wanted to come back to my house.
But we made up well.