Day 3 on italki!

Hi everybody,

Today I'm in Terni for work. It's a city situated about 100 km from Rome, famous for its waterfalls ("Cascate delle Marmore"), for its steel plant and because it's the city/birthplace of St. Valentine.

Terni is a unique/special/amazing city and its citizens are very friendly; it's a pity that I must work and I can't just enjoy this beautiful city.

Ciao!
Cris

Ben fatto Cris - il tuo inglese è ottimo. Try to not repeat 'Terni is...' too many times (especially close together) as it makes your writing sound a little stilted - use a pronoun instead from time to time. 

Your ability to distinguish when to use 'its' and 'it's' is impressive - many English native speakers think (incorrectly) that there is an apostrophe in the possessive pronoun, so you did very well to get that right. Complimenti!

Day 3 on italki!

Hi everybody,

today I'm in Terni for work, Terni is a city situated about 100 km from Rome. Terni is famous for its waterfalls ("Cascate delle Marmore"), for its steel plant and because it's the city of St. Valentine.

Terni is a very particoular [particolare does not really translate here as particular. 'special' may be better. ] city and its citizens are very friendly, it's a pity that I must work and I can't visit this beautiful city.

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good work!