IELTS TASK 1: Chart 2.... Thanks a million in advance for helping me with corrections.

The chart below provides information on gender distribution, with regards to entertainment preference, of Australian children aged 5-14 years. 

The most popular activity chosen by both genders is watching TV with 100 per cent for both either girls and boys. According to the graph figure, boys made make up a particularly large proportion of the energetic activities: skateboarding, bike riding and computer games. There were was less than 20 per cent between two genders doing in those activities. Also, there was nearly 20 per cent difference in bike riding and electronic games between the (groups of girls and boys) genders. Boys and girls were more equally represented in skateboarding. There were as many girls (approximately 22 per cent) as boys (approximately 39 per cent). The only activity in which the percentage of girls was greater than boys was  (this is because you have already stated the tense above by saying -pentage of girls 'was'-) arts and crafts, where girls outnumbered boys by 59 per cent to 38 per cent.
Overall, it can be seen that there is a difference between entertainment choices of girls and boys; however, it could be said that the distribution of girls and boys in entertainment listed (or 'the list provided'?), had not created a huge great gap.

M: You write very well! I am in awe of your choice of topics!