Public Enemies
today I watched the film called public enemies. Film opens with the scene where main character Johnny Dillinger tried to escape from jail. he escaped successfully. action takes place in America in 30s. As many of you know that in the 30s in America were a lot of crimes, gangsters, killers. And how I Can forget about famous Chicago mafia. John Dillinger after his escape became the most famous bank robber. During all film he robs banks. Film tells us the story about friendship, love, and courage. Starring Johnny Depp.
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Public Enemies
Today I watched the film called "Public Enemies". The film opens with the scene where main character Johnny Dillinger tries to escape from jail. He escaped successfully. The action takes place in America in the 30s. As many of you know, that in the 30s in America there were a lot of crimes that were commited along with many gangsters and killers. And how can I Can forget about the famous Chicago Mafia. John Dillinger After his escape, John Dillinger became the most famous bank robber. During all film He robs banks throughout the film. The film tells us a the story about friendship, love and courage. Starring Johnny Depp.
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