Dear Annie,
I am flying to Birmingham right now/I'm on my way to Birmingham. It's a nice clear day, a little bit too hot in Venice, but I know that in Birmingham will be surely cooler it will surely be cooler in Birmingham.
The sight view from the plane is gorgeous. Just a few minutes ago the sandy beaches of Jesolo was were clearly visible. Then the plane made a large curve and flew over the lagoon and Venice Venice and the lagoon. It was amazing to see how this part of Italy is shaped from above: a the mastership of an artist. A crescent with a fish inside. I can't describe it better, but I suggest (that) you to have have a look of at it on Google Maps, it will give you a fairly good idea.
Now we are above the clouds and it seems like we are floating on a whipped cream sea sea of whipped cream!
I will send you this message as soon as possible when we'll we land .
I can't wait to meet you!
Hugs
Daniela

Letter to Annie

Dear Annie,
I am flying to Birmingham. It's a nice clear day; a little bit too hot in Venice, but I know that (in) Birmingham will surely be  cooler, 

The sight from the plane is gorgeous. Just a few minutes ago the sandy beach of Jesolo was clearly visible. Then the plane made a large curve and flew over the lagoon and Venice. It was amazing to see how this part of Italy is shaped: a (mastership?) of an artist. A crescent with a fish inside. I can't describe it better, but I suggest that you have a look  it on Google Maps; it will give you a fairly good idea.
Now we are above the clouds and it seems like we are floating on a whipped cream sea!
I will send you this message as soon as possible when we'll land .
I can't wait to meet you!
Hugs
Daniela