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IELTS Writing Task 1 Practice Letter No 12, Correct it Please You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. You should write at least 150 words Dear sir, I am writing to inquire you that I need to buy Sony DVD, I had checked on last weekend in Sony’s authorize company’s shop in my town but DVD player but it was not available here. If DVD player with FM radio is available at your shop or if not, will you order for me? and in how much time DVD player will be available for me, on the other side if already you have how long will you keep/hold for me, I have plan to visit your shop on the coming weekend’s Saturday. Would you please tell me the price of that DVD player? You can write a letter a to my home address (given below) or you can call me on my mobile number 123456789. I am waiting for your quick response. Regards/Sincerely yours Awais

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Dear sir,
I am writing to inquire about a Sony DVD that I would like to buy. Last weekend, I checked the authorized Sony company shop in my town but the DVD player was not available there.
Is a DVD player with FM radio available at your shop? If not, can you order one for me? Also, how much time would it take before it is available?

On the other hand, if you already have a DVD player, can it be held for me? I plan to visit your shop next week Saturday. Would you please tell me the price of any available DVD player with the features I want?

You can write a letter a to my home address (given below) or you can call me on my mobile number 123456789.
I am waiting for your quick response.
Regards/Sincerely yours
Awais

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OK thanks for telling me that, send it, I will message you my email ID.
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i have some text about writing letters but actually i do not know about how much good they are. i didn't study them because i will take an academic test. so maybe they could be good for you. if u want i can send it for you.
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mistakes in the correction?
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check the mistakes below..:) not good just fair

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