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American adventures. So,The last year I was In U.S! At the beginning I was so excited about the country all news things around there and a day I got an idea why not go to a Nightclub. Well then, I was pissing off my friends, asking them to go to a night club, after all, we are in U.S. So, is supposed to be fun and excited. Isn't it? At least was what I was expecting for. Then I convinced her to go with me, But I didn't have my ID yet, just my passport, but people said that was not a good idea go out with it, then I took copy of my passport, thinking that it would be just fine, thinking that if I just explain to the big guy at the nightclub door he would let me in.Because I was a foreigner, I didn't know about anything about this time. I can't forget to say, that night was about -15 C and I'm brazilian I had never get that cold in my whole life before, in Brazil Our coldest weather is about 9 C. But anyway I wasn't concerned about the weather for a while because after all, I should just get inside the car and then park it an then get out and go inside the nightclub. What could be bad?! So, my friend came to pick me up at the home that I was living in, and I was following my friend's tips to dress myself up. She told me that I should put a nice and summers cloths, because inside the nightclub could be really warm, and there was no place to put it, I if put on winter cloths I would be holding it the whole night ( actually would be impossible the whole night, because, (at least the nightclub that I went in, usually ends at 2 am, in Brazil it is just starting about 2 am) but anyway . So I did, but i took my coat with me ( it wasn't that warm, but could help me out). So, we leave. When we got the place, she parked the car a little bit far from the nightclub's entrance and then suddenly she forgot which street we should walk on. Remembering that there was -15 outside. She started look at her phone to make sure about the address. But was too could she could even think at this moment, she was shaking and freezing and me too, our mouths was shaking as well. ( I forgot to say, she told me to let my coat inside the car, because would be fast to go until the nightclub, Maybe,...but was too cold to ratiocinate). After 5 endless minutes she found the way and we start to run, I don't know how, but we did run! And finally we arrived at the nightclub. Continue...

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So, The last year I was in the US! At the beginning I was so excited about the country, all news things everything new around there and a one day I got an idea: why not go to a nightclub? Well then, I was pissing off my friends, asking them to go to a nightclub as, after all, we were in the U.S. So Well, it is supposed to be fun and excited exciting, isn't it? At least, that was what I was expecting for. Then I convinced her to go with me, but I didn't have my ID yet, just my passport, but people said that was not a good idea go out with it, then I took copy of my passport, thinking that it would be just fine, thinking that if I just explain to the big guy at the nightclub door he would let me in. Because I was a foreigner, I didn't know about anything about this time. I can't forget to say, that night was about -15 C and I'm brazilian I had never get been that cold in my entire life before, in Brazil Our coldest weather is about 9 C. But anyway, I wasn't concerned about the weather for a while because after all, I should could just get inside the car and then park it and then get out and go inside the nightclub. What could be bad go wrong?! So, my friend came to pick me up at the home that I was living in, and I was following my friend's tips to dress (myself) up. She told me that I should put a on nice, summery clothes, because inside the nightclub it could be really warm, and there would be no place to put it, I if put on winter clothes I would be holding it (for) the whole night (actually it would be impossible for the whole night, because, (at least the nightclub that I went into, it usually closes at 2am, in Brazil it is just starting [nightclubs are just opening] at about 2am), but anyway... So I did, but I took my coat with me (it wasn't that warm, but it could help me out). So, we left. When we got the place, she parked the car a little bit too far from the nightclub's entrance and then suddenly she forgot which street we should walk on. Remembering that there it was -15 outside. She started to look at her phone to be sure about the address. But it was too cold for her to she could even think at that moment, she was shaking and freezing and I was too, our mouths were shaking as well. (I forgot to say, she told me to let leave my coat inside the car, because we could get to the nightclub faster. Maybe... but it was too cold to think rationally ratiocinate). After five endless minutes she found the way and we started to run, I don't know how, but we did run! And finally we arrived at the nightclub.
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