work overtime on Saturday
As no requesting for working overtime on Saturday by our company, but we have to continue to do the jobs on Saturday,maybe and Sunday.This overtime is free. I think this is common in trading business.
Although most of the colleague is disgusted with this, nobody show the dissatisfaction to the boss. And the boss said to us: trade business need with passion and work overtime is a regular occurrence.
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Your use of conjunctions is correct. Well done. However, there are small problems with the phrases they connect. To help improve your English, it is best if we remove the conjunctions and work with simple sentences.
Plurals
This sentence has incorrect use of plurals:
"Most of the colleague is disgusted with this."
Do you know how to fix the plurals in this sentence?
Word Order
This sentence uses incorrect word order:
"As no requesting for working overtime on Saturday by our company."
Do you know how to fix the word order of this sentence? (To be honest, I am not certain what this sentence means.)
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Sorry. If I try to help you here in your Notebook, my paragraphs are removed. I will reply in our Message conversation, okay?
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Your spelling, sentence structure, and choice of words are very good. Well done. However, there are two problems that I can see.
First, you need to be careful with plurals, and how plurals affect the words around them. (Please tell me if you understand, or do not understand, what I mean by this.)
Second, you seem to be using words in the order they would be said in Chinese, which is sometimes different from the order of words in English. (Please tell me if you understand, or do not understand, what I mean by this.)
Even though there are some problems with your composition, I understand your meaning. Your English is good, but we can make it better. Please let me know if you understand what I mean by "plurals" and by "word order".
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