My Dreams

Hi there, I am going to talk about my dreams. First, I wish I could travel around the world, especially to Switzerland, France, Austria, Spain and Italy. Then, I would go to Madrid to support my favourite club, Real Madrid. After that, I would fall in love with a French man and get married in Venice. Then, we would spend our honey moon in the Maldives. Finally, we would go to Africa to help people there. I would be the most happiest person if my dreams became real.

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My Dreams

Hi there, I will talk about my dreams. First, I wish that I can travel around the world. Specially to Switzerland, France, Austria, Spain and Italy. Then, I want to go to Madrid to support my favourite club Real Madrid. After that, I fall in love with french man and get married in Venice. Then ,we spend honey moon in Maldives. Finally, we go to Africa to help people there. I will be the most happiest person if my dream becomes a reality.

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My Dreams

Hi there. I will talk about my dreams. First, I wish I could travel around the world, especially to Switzerland, France, Austria, Spain, and Italy. Then, I want to go to Madrid to support my favorite club, Real Madrid. After that, I'll fall in love with a French man and get married in Venice. Then, we'll spend our honeymoon in Maldives. Finally, we'll go to Africa to help people there. I will be the happiest person if my dreams become real.