My Future

I was thinking, and I would like to go to one year in England or in America for a year in order to become fluently in English!
Perhaps during my studies or after. If I go it's during my studies I'm afraid that I won't be able to take them up again. can't restart it.
I think who I prefer after, I would like to work there, get a flat and maybe share it with someone, because, in my mind, it's very expensive to live there!

My future

I was thinking, and that I would like to go one year in to England or in America for one year in order to become fluently in English!
Perhaps during my studies or after. If it's during my studies I'm afraid that I can't won't be able to restart it them. (if you would've said "during my carreer", then it would be ok to write "to restart it" because the word "carreer" is singular, while the word "studies" is plural)
I´ll think who what I prefer after later, I would like to work there, get a flat and maybe share it with someone, because, in my mind, it's very expensive to live there!

Well done!... 

My future

I would like to go to England or the US for one year in order to become fluent in English!
Perhaps I will go during my course of studies, but I wonder whether I will be able to continue studying at my university once I have returned.
Therefore, I prefer to go after my graduation. I would like to work there, get a flat and maybe share it with someone because it is very expensive to live there, I suppose!