American English Corrections

Going to the Gym!

Hey, guys. How are you doing? This is my third video.

Oh, actually, this is video 4 because I spoke about working in the actual third video that I took and I didn't like it. Well, you know, no one likes working! So, I made another video.

Today I'm going to talk about "going to the gym". Yeah, about getting fit, getting stronger, and something else. Haha. Well, let's get started!

I go to the gym to get stronger and to be the strongest man that you've ever seen. Seriously, I go there to be like  a   Arnold Schwarzenegger! No, no, I'm joking! or "No, no, I'm just kidding (around)!"

Actually, I go to the gym to get rid of stress. Yep, it's as simple as that. And how can I do that? Oh,  easily! I go to the gym not only to get fit but I mainly do it for my mind. Working all day on a computer and supporting some users can be very stressful. Yeah, trust me. So I go to the gym to make new friends, to talk or "to be social", and of course, to get stronger!

And the best part is that it's fun! OK, working hard is not an easy thing to do but it's worth doing. It really is!  Well, I've got or just "I have" in formal contexts  to go. Take care, guys

This might be an alternate fifth paragraph:

Actually, I go to the gym to get rid of stress. Yep, it's as simple as that. Of course, I go there to get fit too but I mainly do it to relieve stress. Working all day on a computer and also doing desktop support can be very stressful. Trust me. So after work, I head to the gym to make new friends, to be social, to pump some iron, pack on some serious muscle, and get stronger, and to leave behind all the stress that built up at work.... and the best part is that it's fun! Concentrating on each rep during a set is a great way to forget about all the issues you had to tackle at work while also doing something beneficial for your body as it helps build muscle more!