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Self-introduction Hello. I have just become an italki language partner. I would like you to correct my self-introduction. Then I can write about me in proper English in the profile section. My name is Mami. I was born and raised in Kyoto, Japan. I like reading and taking a walk. There are a lot of places we can walk around in Kyoto, seeing old temples or shrines. I have studied English for years by myself. As I retired from a company this March, I have enough time to study English. I would like to improve my English, and if I get high score on some qualification tests, I will teach at home or by e-mail. I would like you to help me study English, and I am looking forward to helping you with your Japanese studies. Thank you

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完璧です!


My name is Mami. I was born and raised in Kyoto, Japan. I like reading and taking a walk. There are a lot of places to we can walk around in Kyoto, seeing old temples or shrines.

"to walk around" sounds more natural, but your sentence is also correct.

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