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making friends it's strange that there are no session this week do you all enjoy the summer holidays? why i don't have !!!! hope you don't forget to practice~~~ recently i make several new friends .all of them are kind and patient .i like talking to you all. i found i merely forget the french and be a little nervous to speak it out. i am too lazy to practice , i regret for that. and i have delay my fiction creation for 2months .still cos my lazy. i need be supervisor !!! i will change my bad personality and working much more harder :P

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Making friends

It's strange that there are no sessions this week. Do you all enjoy the summer holidays? Why I don't have !!!! Hope you don't forget to practice~~~

Recently I make made several new friends.  All of them are kind and patient.  I like talking to you all.

I found I merely forget the French and be was a little nervous to speak it out.  I am too lazy to practice, I regret for that.

And i have delayed my fiction creation writing for 2 months.  Still 'cos my I'm lazy.  I need be a supervisor!!!

I will change my bad personality habits and working much more harder :P

 

Notes:

"Do you all enjoy the summer holidays?" could also be "Are you all enjoying the summer holidays?

"Why I don't have!" Don't have what?  

I changed "personality" to "habits" because it's more appropriate in this context.

The first word in a sentence and "I" are always capatilized

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Making friends

Its' strange that there are no sessions this week!  Is everyone enjoying the summer holidays? 

Why I don't have (What ?)!!!!  I hope that you don't forget to practice~~~

Recently I made several new friends, all of them are kind and patient. I like talking to everyone.

I found that I merely forgot the french and that I am a little nervous when I speak it.  I am too lazy to practice and I regret that I don't find the time for practice.  

I have also delayed my fiction creation for 2 months because of my laziness. I need to be supervisored !!!

I will change my bad personality trait and continue working much harder :P

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thank you!
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good girl

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