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Torrevieja, place of holidays Right now I’m enjoying of my holidays in Torrevieja. The weather here is absolutely fantastic. Many people says that this place is an special temperature due to we have very close one of the most important salt-flat of Europe. The weather is fantastic for whole year. Torrevieja holds its anual party the fourth of August, fireworks and special events take place this month. Party is for the holy San Hermenegildo, he protected the city of earthquakes. Things. However Torrevieja has many problems, for example, in summer has an incredible overpopulation, a lot of people all over the Europe come in to enjoy theirs vacations here, englishs, germans, dutchs and of course spanishs people. … but I realized that it isn’t the main problem here. Mainly we have a serious problem with the pollution. The people isn’t environment conscious, waste and litter are all over the place, it is absolutely incredible. Of course, I think the main guilty is the council, basically there is a lack of control but on the other hand I think the people must be more involvement and take more care with the discharches. Note: If you had some minutes you could help me and review my composition. This was very useful for me and I was very grateful. Thanks in advance.

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Torrevieja, A Place for Holidays

 

Right now I’m enjoying of my holidays in Torrevieja. The weather here is absolutely fantastic. Many people says that this place is at an special temperature due to the fact that we have very close one of the most important salt flats in Europe nearby. The weather is fantastic for the whole year.

Torrevieja holds its annual party on the fourth of August, fireworks and special events take place this month. Party is for the holy San Hermenegildo, he protected the city of earthquakes. Things.

However, Torrevieja has many problems, for example, in summer has an incredible overpopulation, a lot of people from all over the Europe come in to enjoy theirs vacations here: the Englishs, the Germans, the Dutchs and of course the Spanishs .

… but I realized that it isn’t the main problem here. Mainly we have a serious problem with the pollution. The people aren't environmentally conscious, waste and litter are all over the place, it is absolutely incredible.
Of course, I think the main guilty party is the council, basically there is a lack of control but on the other hand I think the people must be more involved and take more care with the waste.

Note: If you had some minutes you could help me and review my composition.
This was very useful for me and I am very grateful.
Thanks in advance.

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