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A bad day Unbelievable! I cought cold in such a hot weather unexpectedly! I slept an hour more than before this morning, but when I got up I still felt very tired. I couldn't make any sound as well as feel headache.After I had breakfast,I began to have sore throat.What a terrible Monday!As the thought of being going to attend school for seven days this week,I wanted to cry. I couldnn't ask for leave couse the classes were pretty tense.So I sat alone far away from my classmate in order not to infect them.I kept drinking water all day,but I still felt worse before I had lunch.I have no medicine in my dorm.The only method I had is to drink bottle and bottles of water.I felt hopeless.How I wish my mum around me,but in vain,my mum is 800 kilometers away.Thus I have to learn to be independent. Although I feel tired now, but I won't give up my everyday jogging and I think I will be better soon!

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A Bad Day

It's unbelievable! I unexpectedly cought a cold in such a hot weather unexpectedly! I slept an hour more than usual  before this morning, but when I got up I still felt very tired. I couldn't talk make any sound as well as feel and I had a headache.After I had breakfast, my throat felt sore I began to have sore throat.What a terrible Monday! At the thought of not being able  going to attend school for seven days this week,I wanted to cry.
I couldnn't ask for leave  because couse the classes were pretty intense. So I sat alone far away from my classmates in order so as not to infect them. I kept drinking water all day, but I still felt worse bad before I had lunch.I have no medicine in my dorm.The only method remedy I have is to drink bottles and bottles of water. I felt hopeless. How I wish my mum was here  around me, but in vain, my mum is 800 kilometers away.Thus I have to learn to be independent.
Although I feel tired now, but I won't give up my everyday jogging and I think I will be better soon!

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P.S.  Feel better soon.

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