First notebook entry: Introducing myself

     English is a language spoken around the world.  For me, I think having a good knowlegde of English is necessary because I want to travel around the world.  I am just a high school student now but I want to go abroad to study after college.  I think it is important to study English as early as I can to prepare for the TOEFL and GRE in my college days to come.

     I also want to make friends with people from around the world.  I think that by learning English from them, I can get a good understanding of them, their country, their culture, and so on.  I hope I can make friends with them.

[Me] - Good job, brother.  There are several things I noticed and would like to point out to you.

1.  Two spaces after a period ( . )
2.  One space after a comma ( , )
3.  Start each new sentence with a capital letter (example:  It is cold today.  Yes, it is very cold!)
4.  You had a few spelling mistakes and that happens even for native English speakers.
5.  Try to keep each sentence to a single thought.

You did a wonderful job.  Keep practicing and you will be a true master of the English language my young friend.