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My family My family is very important for me. I have one brother and two sisters. My brother is called Jose and my sisters Isabel and Silvia. My dad died twelve years ago and i really miss a lot. was very fun to be with. Always had a smile on his face... My mum remarried with Fernando (is a good man and i will have a lot of affection) they're have very happy. And i'm very happy for they. I have four nephwes. Are most important for me. the kids is the better of the world. They give me happiness. I love go with they to beach, forest or anywhere. Thanks for my family i'm the person who i'm. And i'm very grateful.

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My family

My family is very important for to me. I have one brother and two sisters.

My brother is called Jose and my sisters are Isabel and Silvia.

My dad died twelve years ago and I really miss him a lot. He was very fun to be with and always had a smile on his face...

My mum remarried with Fernando ( he is a good man and I will have a lot of affection for him) they're have very happy, and I'm very happy for they them.

I have four nephwes. They are most important for to me. The kids is are the better of the world. They give me happiness.


I love to go to with they to the beach with them, or the forest or anywhere.

Thanks for to my family, I'm the person who I'm. And I'm very grateful.

Note: A more common way to say this might be, "Thanks to my family, I'm the person who I am today."

 

 

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My family

My family is very important for me. I have one brother and two sisters.

My brother's name is Jose and my sisters Isabel and Silvia.

My dad died twelve years ago and i really miss him a lot. He was very fun to be with and always had a smile on his face...

My mum remarried with Fernando (is a good man and i will have a lot of affection) they're have very happy. And i'm very happy for they.

I have four nephwes. They are very important for me. the kids is the better of the world. They give me happiness.
I love to go with them to the beach, the forest, or anywhere.

Thanks to my family I'm the person I am. And I'm very grateful.

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My family

My family is very important to me. I have a brother and two sisters.

My brother's Jose and my sisters Isabel and Silvia.

My dad died twelve years ago and I really miss a lot. He was very fun to be with, and always had a smile on his face...  

My mum remarried with Fernando (he is a good man and i have a lot of affection) they're very happy. And i'm very happy for them.

I have four nephews. they are the most important for me. the kids is the better of the world. They give me happiness.
I love to go with them to beach, forest or anywhere.

Thanks to my family. I'm the person who i'm and i'm very grateful for that.

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You sound like you have a wonderful family! My nephews bring me a lot of joy also, they are so full of life! :)
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My family

My family is very important for to me. I have one brother and two sisters.

My brother's name is called Jose and my sisters are Isabel and Silvia.

My dad died twelve years ago, and I really miss a lot. He was very fun to be with, and always had a smile on his face...

My mum remarried with Fernando (he is a good man and I will have a lot of affection). They're have very happy, and I'm very happy for them.

I have four nephews. They are most very important for to me. The kids is are the better part of the world. They give bring me happiness. I love to go with them to the beach, forest or anywhere.

Thanks for to my family I'm the person who I am. And I'm very grateful.

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