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A letter
Dear Tom,
I feel was exceedingly exceptionally/truly delighted to received your last letter in which you invited me to attend your birthday party. As one of your best friends, it would have made me happy to say yes. However, I must decline because of the upcoming examination.
I am preparing for the my postgraduate examination and eager to pass it because I have been try studying for one year. If I pass the exam, I will get the admission of the exam, which means I can to start my further study in my dream university.
I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apologies. Finally, and most importantly, happy birthday! I will make up [make up means to atone] for my absence with a my gift for your birthday.
Yours
Li Ming
A letter
Dear Tom,
I was feel exceedingly delighted to received your last letter in which you inviting ed me to attend your birthday party. As one of your best friends, it would make me happy to say yes. I would love to come, however, I must decline because of the coming examination.
I am preparing for the a postgraduate examination and I'm eager to pass it because I have been studying trying for the last one year. If I pass this exam it will mean get the admission of the exam,which means I can begin start my further study in at my dream university.
I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. Finally and most importantly, happy birthday! I will make up forward/send my gift for your birthday.
Yours
Li Ming
If this Tom is one of your best friends, he would know all about your studies and forcoming exam. Also, if he is a best friend this letter is too formal.
A letter
Dear Tom,
I am delighted to received your last letter in which you invited me to attend your birthday party. As one of your best friends, I would love to say yes but unfortunately I must decline as I have to prepare for my exam.
I am preparing for the postgraduate examination and eager to pass it because I have been trying for a year now. If I pass the exam, I can continue my studies in my dream university.
I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. Finally and most importantly, happy birthday! I have a gift for you!
Yours
Li Ming
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