Hello Roberta, 

I'm glad you and your boyfriend had a great time in Malta. I have wanted to visit the island for many years, and I hope that next year I'll get the chance. 

My travel in to Malta

The next Last week I go went to in Malta with my boyfriend for a holiday. We visited all of the island with the by bus. There are more many beautifull beaches and in the at night there are many discos and clubs where all you can spend the time up to party until morning. We had fun and i think that we will return there.

Hi, I'm not sure if you wanted to write about your future trip to Malta, or about a trip that has already taken place. You use both a future tense ("next week") and a past tense ("we visited"). I've corrected the grammar for a journal about a future trip. Grayed text deletes unnecessary particles, misused adjectives and incorrect spelling. Highlighted text are grammar points that I have added to make the passage grammatically correct. Things to keep in mind: punctuation and capitalization, appropriate tense. Hope this helps.

My Travel to Malta

The Next week, I am going in to Malta with my boyfriend for a holiday,. We visited all the island with by bus,. There are more beautifull beaches. and in At night there are many discos and clubs where all everyone can spend the time up to until morning. We had fun, and I think that we will return to Malta.

My travel in Malta

Last week I went to Malta with my boyfriend for a holiday, we visited all the island by bus, there are many beautiful beaches and at night there are many discos and clubs where you can stay until morning, we had fun and i think that we will return there.

Good effort!  I just corrected the grammar and word choice. In English it's more common to not have so many commas and to break the clauses up more.

Next week - this means in the future, the week coming