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Family memory from my childhood When I was around 9 years old My cousins and I used to go to the recreative vacations.That course consisted on going to a camp or make handcrafts and get around the city in Christmas.We ere in a bus for kids and the driver always told us joked and he put loud music all the time.I remember that.I spent a wonderful time.Now my cousins and I tell about that and the most terrible was my cousin lost a pretty blanket on a camp and my aunt loved that blanket.That was terrible.Nowdays we don't go to the recreative vacations because We grow up.

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     When we were young, my cousins and I used to go on vacations together. We would go to a camp, or do crafts, or visit the city at Christmastime. I remember one vacation when we would ride a youth bus and the driver would tell us jokes and play music loud all the time. That was a wonderful moment in our lives. We still reminisce about the time at a camp when my cousin lost her mother's favorite blanket. That was terrible. Since we have gotten older we don't go on vacations together anymore. 

Buen cuento, Daniela. Mis primos y yo nos gustamos recordar el pasado sobre nuestros momentos juntos de los niños también.

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Family memory from my childhood

When I was around 9 years old, my cousins and I used to go to the on recreational vacations. These course consisted on of going to a camp, or making handcrafts and get going around the city in at  Christmas. We were in a bus for kids and the driver always told us jokes and he put on loud music all the time. I remember that. I spent had a wonderful time. Now my cousins and I tell talk about that. and The most terrible experience was when my cousin lost a pretty blanket on a camp; and my aunt loved that blanket. That was terrible. Nowadays we don't go to the on recreational vacations because we have grown up.

 

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Family memory from my childhood

When I was around 9 years old, my cousins and I used to go on to the recreative vacations.That course consisted on of going to a camp or make making handcrafts and get getting around the city in during Christmas.We ere were in a bus for kids, and the driver always told us joked jokes. and He would also put loud music on all the time.I remember that.I spent had a wonderful time.Now my cousins and I tell talk about that. and The most terrible thing to happen was my cousin lost a pretty blanket on a at camp, and my aunt loved that blanket.That was terrible.Nowdays we don't go on to the recreative vacations because we grow up have grown up.

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