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Last weekend I saw 2 movies , they both were directed by Chinese director , one named Tiny time, another one named The Continent. First one seemed gorgeous, but just for fun didnt have a deeply meaning. Second one seemed boring but afforded for thought.
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Last weekend I saw 2 movies. They both were directed by Chinese directors - the first one is was by a director named one named Tiny time and the is called another one named The Continent. The first one was great seemed gorgeous, but it was just for fun - it didnt have a deeply meaning. The second one seemed boring, but provoked a little afforded for thought.
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