what are we looking for ?
I was always thinking about the meaning of life .Someone chases for money ,someone chases for love ,someone chases for authority.As for me ,i'm confused ,i don't know what i am running after .When i was a kid ,i desperately want to grow up ,however ,as far as i become older ,i wanna get more .i wanna be loved ,i wanna be rich ,i wanna a good job ,i wanna more friends ,i got these ideas in my head which crazy me ,so that i nearly forget what i originally wanted was .
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what are we looking for ?
I was always thinking about the meaning of life .Someone chases looks for money ,someone chases looks for love , and someone chases looks for authority power. As for me ,i'm confused ,i don't know what i am running after .When i was a kid ,i desperately wanted to grow up ,however ,as far as i become older ,i wanna get more my interest for getting older goes up as I grow up.i wanna be loved ,i wanna be rich ,i wanna want a good job ,i wanna want more friends ,i got have these ideas in my head which crazy me drives me crazy, so such that i nearly forget what i originally wanted was .Chase" means to physically run after something. For example, "police chased the stolen car through the city".
Wanna" stands for "want to" so you cannot say "I wanna (want to) a good job"
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Here is my revised version of your paragraph:
What are we looking for?
I always think about the meaning of life. Some people chase after money, some chase after love, some chase after authority. As for me, i'm confused; i don't know what I am running after. When I was a kid, I desperately wanted to grow up however, now that I have become older, I want more. I want to be loved. I want to be rich. I want a good job and I want more friends. All of these ideas in my head are making me crazy so much so that I've nearly forgotten what it is I originally wanted.**Be sure to be careful with your punctuation and spacing.
Good work :)
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Everything you desire is perfect and normal.The most important factor is how to carry out and get benefits and happiness .
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