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Exciting Summer vacation!
My summer vacation is going to start from this comming coming Friday! ('coming' could also be omitted)
I'm very excited because I have a plan to go where I want to go.
At first First, I'm going to Everland which is a famous amusement park in Korea.
I really expect the Summer parade of Everland, it is called "Summer Splash", and we can enjoy splashing water! (Sorry, I do not understand this.)
Second, I will go to Seoul to meet my friend.
One of my university friends got married 1 months month ago, so she prepare is preparing to have a house warming party!
The most important point is that I can do all of these with my family, especially my son!
I hope that everyone can enjoy summer as you plan.
(I am not sure what you are trying to say. Maybe you want to say - I hope that everyone will enjoy their plans for the summer.)
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