Amercian English Corrections

Leaving from Our Comfort Zone All words except preposition and article not appearing at the beginning are capitalized in a title.

To learn anything, I think is necessary to take some risks. We must be able to leave from our comfort  zone or "...step out of our comfort zone" or "...push passed our comfort zone", etc. if we want to improve or learn. But sometimes, that is not easy for people like me.

For me, the shyness or "being shy" is a really big wall to climb in order to improve my English. I know is absolutely necessary to talk in English and make mistakes, but it is really hard for me to say something if I'm not sure if it's grammatically correct.

Writing is different, because I make a lot of mistakes too, of course, but there is not  a  instant feedback and you have more time to think about what you want to talk about. I would word this a little more naturally as "Writing is different though, because although I make a lot of mistakes when writing too, there isn't instant feedback (from the other person) and I have more time to think about what I want to talk about."

So... I'm here, looking for people who can/will help me to take "To" before "take" is optional here. Use whichever you like more style-wise. the next step at leaving my comfort zone.  or "take the next step at stepping out of my comfort zone." I think "security zone" means the same  thing as "comfort zone", I don't really ever hear anyone say "security zone" though. :)

Very well done!

Leaving from our comfort zone

To learn anything I think it is necessary to take some risks. We must be able to leave from our comfort zone if we want to improve or learn. But sometimes it is not easy for people like me. 

For me, the shyness is a really big wall to climb in order to improve my English. I know it is absolutely necessary to talk in English and make mistakes, but it is really hard for me to say something if I'm not sure if it's grammatically correct. 

Writing is different, because I make a lot of mistakes too, of course, but there is no t a  instant feedback and you have more time to think about what you want to talk about say. 

So... I'm here, looking for people who can help me take the next step to leave my comfort and security zone. 

Sergio: I also agree that it's hard to leave your comfort zone when learning a new language. What I have found helpful is to find a language partner who is a native Spanish speaker who is learning English. This way, I understand they will also make mistakes in my language so I'm less shy about speaking and saying things incorrectly in their language. It has helped me a lot.  You will just have to find the opposite!

Saludos, 

Emrys

Leaving from our comfort zone

To learn anything I think is necessary to take some risks. We must be able to leave from our comfort zone if we want to improve or learn. But sometimes it is not easy for people like me.

For me the shyness is a really big wall to climb in order to improve my English. I know is absolutely necessary to talk in English and make mistakes, but it is really hard for me to say something if I'm not sure if it's grammatically correct.

Writing is different, because I make a lot of mistakes too, of course, but there is not a instant feedback and you have more time to think what you want to talk about.

So... I'm here, looking for people who help me to take the step to leave from me comfort and security zone :)

This is very well-written and I feel the same way about my Spanish.

The mistakes here are very small. 

Leaving from our comfort zone
To learn anything I think is necessary to take some risks. (This makes sense, but I might choose a different word order, like "I think it is necessary to take some risks in order to learn anything," but this is personal preference.) We must be able to leave from our comfort zone if we want to improve or learn. But sometimes it is not easy for people like me.

For me the shyness is a really big wall to climb in order to improve my English. (Again, this makes sense, but I would choose a different word order. Maybe "My shyness makes improving my English a big wall to climb." And you used a metaphor, which is very impressive!) I know it is absolutely necessary to talk in English and make mistakes, but it is really hard for me to say something if I'm not sure if it's grammatically correct.

Writing is different, because I make a lot of mistakes too, of course, but there is not a instant feedback and you have more time to think about what you want to talk about.

So... I'm here, looking for people who help me to take the step to leave from me comfort and security zone :)

Great work!