Skating
I went to skating at c\Central park.
I really enjoyed to skating. Long time don’t skating.
The skating rink was fill with a lot of couple. A lot of couple enjoyed skating. Hand in hand!! The skating rink heared some nice music.
There is nice mood!!!
Next time, I want to go couple!! haha~
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Skating
I went<You can say "went skating" or "went to skate">
I really enjoy
<same here, you can "enjoy skating" or enjoyed skating. You could also say "It's been a long time since I've skated">
The skating rink was filled with a lot of couple. A lot of couples enjoyed skating. Hand in hand!!
<Here you can say it was filled with a lot of people or say "The skating rink was full" In your next sentence I would have said "There were a lot of couples enjoying themselves, skating hand in hand!">
The skating rink
<I'm not sure if you were trying to say that the rink played good music or you heard good music their. If you meant to say you heard good music write "At the skating rink, I heard some nice music">
Next time, I want to go as a couple!! haha~
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