My home town

My home town is Bucaramanga, in the department of Santander, Colombia. It is a very beautiful city very beauty.The climate is very nice, it's not so too hot or so too cold - it is a perfect climate. now, I live in Santa Marta because my mother and my brother wanted to come here but the temperature is very much really hot. It is a city along on the Atlantic Ocean, so because is most which makes it very [or therefore it is very]hot and wet.

i hope that like me later. [Maybe you meant: "I hope that I will get used to it."]

I would have that you can like you to help me. i want learn everything about the English and so please correct my mistakes. Thank you.

Well done!  (The word 'I' is always a capital letter.)  I enjoyed finding out about Colombia.  :)  

My home town

My home town is Bucaramanga, in the department of Santander, Colombia. It is a a very beautiful city very beauty. The climate is very nice, it's not too hot or too cold - it is a perfect climate. now, I live now in Santa Marta because my mother and my brother wanted come here but the temperature is very much hot. It is a city along the Atlantic ocean, so because it is most hot and wet. I hope that they like me later.

I would like it if you can help me. I want to learn everything about the English and correct my mistakes. Thank you.

[Good work.  Remember your capitalization.  Also 'I' used as a pronoun is always capitalized.]

My home town

My home town is Bucaramanga, in the region of Santander, Colombia. Is a very beautiful city. The climate is very nice; it's not so hot or so cold, it is a perfect climate. Now, I live in Santa Marta because my mother and my brother wanted come here. But the temperature is very hot because it is a city along the Atlantic Ocean, which makes it very humid. I hope I begin to like it soon.

i would have that you can help me. i want learn everything about the english and correct my mistakes. thank you.

My home town

My home town is Bucaramanga, in the department of Santander, Colombia.It is a very beautiful city beauty. The climate is very nice/pleasant, it's not too so hot or too so cold,it is a perfect climate. Now, I live in Santa Marta because my mother and my brother wanted to come here but the temperature is much higher very much hot, (or: the weather is much hotter). Santa Marta is a city along the Atlantic Ocean, so because is most  therefore it is hotter and more humid hot and wet. I hope that I will like it eventually. 

I hope i would have that you can help me.  I want to learn everything about the English and correct my mistakes. Thank you.

My home town

My home town is Bucaramanga, in the department of Santander, Colombia. It is a very beautiful city. The climate here is very nice, it's not too hot or too cold, it is a perfect climate. Now, I live in Santa Marta because my mother and my brother wanted to come here but the temperature is very hot,it is a city along the Atlantic ocean, so it is most hot and wet. I hope I'll like it later. 
 
I would like it if you can help me. I want to learn everything about English and correct my mistakes. Thank you.