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Hello Mr Alaric, egain Today was a beautiful day, I was to made different thing in my home, I was put pictures,photos and painting on various walls and then I made a amazing brunch, I had my wife as an assistant, i don't like to much work with her because always look like my boss, but you know sometimes after doing a good job all job have a good reward, is it truth , see you tomorrow brunch

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Hello Mr Alaric, egain

Hello Alaric, Again

Today was a beautiful day,

Today was a beautiful day.

I was to made different thing in my home,

I did different things around my home.

I was put pictures,photos and painting on various walls and then

I hung pictures and photos and I painted various wall.
I made a amazing brunch,

Then, I made an amazing brunch.

I had my wife as an assistant,

I had my wife as an assistant.

i don't like to much work with her because always look like my boss,

I don't like too much to work with her because she always seems like my boss.

but you
know sometimes after doing a good job all job have a good reward,

But you know, doing a good job has its rewards.

is it truth , see you tomorrow

This is the truth. See you tomorrow.

 

NOTES: Call me "Alaric", not "Mr. Alaric". Haha, do you want me to call you "Señor Rive"?

Again, you have way too many commas and not enough periods. I think English sentences are shorter, in general, than Spanish sentences.

 

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

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