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20140711. Let's go Thailand.
Last Friday to Tuesday, I triped to Thailand.
Before I went to Thailand, I have worried about its weather.
Because I searched weather on the Internet, it showed just a thundershower.
Fortunately, during I stay there, 2 days were sunny and 1 day was cloudy and rainy.
Anyway, in my trip, the first spot(or start trip spot?) was Busan national Airport in Korea.
After I took Jeju Air about 6 hours, I arrived Bangkok.
Let's go to Thailand.
From Llast fFriday to tTuesday, I was on a trip triped to Thailand.
Before I went to Thailand, I worried about its weather.
bBecause I went, I looked up the searched weather on the Internet, but it showed just a thundershower .
Fortunately, Dduring I my stay there, 2 of the days were are sunny and 1 day was is cloudy and rainy.
Anyway, during In my trip, the first spot stop was the Busan national Aairport in Korea.
After this, I was on a rode Jeju Air plane for about 6 hours and I arrived Bangkok.
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20140711. Let's go to Thailand.
Last friday to tuesday, I triped to Thailand. I was in Thailand from Friday to Tuesday.
Before I went to Thai, I was concerned worried about its the weather there because the weather forecast on the Internet I searched weather on Internet, it showed just a thundershowers .
Fortunately, during I my stay there, 2 days are were sunny and 1 day is was cloudy and rainy.
Anyway, my first stop In my trip, the first spot(or start trip spot?) was Busan National Airport in Korea.
Then I travelled by After I rode Jeju Air for about 6 hours, until I arrived in Bangkok.
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