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my first article Today is very hot.I saty in home and find a film to watch. I watch a film called <The Great Gatsby>.The film tell a love story about a rich man Jay Gatsby.It's a tragedy. In my opinion, Gatsby's love is true, he hide his life experiences and cheat Daisy actually.He is a poor man. Gatsby's friends are heartless,in the end of the film,nobody attend his funeral but only Nick.People awalys attracted by money and live a luxury and dissipation life, but they have no love .They always only think about themsevles. It's so pain. I like a song in the film called <young and beautiful>."Will you still love me when I'm no longer young and beautiful. Will you still love me when I got nothing but my aching soul." It's make me sighing with emotion.

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My First Article

Today it's very hot. I am at saty in home looking for and find a film to watch.
I watched a film called 'The Great Gatsby'.The film tells a love story about a rich man, Jay Gatsby. It's a tragedy.
In my opinion, Gatsby's love is true, he hide his life experiences and cheated Daisy actually. He is a poor man.
Gatsby's friends are heartless,in at the end of the film,only Nick nobody attended his funeral but only Nick.People are always awalys attracted by money and the life of live a luxury and dissipation life, but they have no love .They always only think about themsevles. It's so painful.
I like a song in the film called 'Young and Beautiful'. The words ask "Will you still love me when I'm no longer young and beautiful? Will you still love me when I' got nothing but my aching soul?" It's They make me sighing with emotion.

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