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I want to travel a lot but I'm not able to now at the moment.
I want to go many places.I prefer living there for a while,seeing the sceneries scenery, knowing some meeting interesting people from different places.
In China,I must visit Tibet-the holy land ,Guangzhou-mixed with history a mix of historical and modern,Yunnan and Jiangsu--has have many beautiful towns.There're There are still many other cities I want to go visit,and but some of them I have been to already,so I won't list them.
For foreign countries,I want to visit Japan-I love the comics and some certain foods,USA-has great movies and TV shows,New Zealand -fresh and beautiful.
I will travel to all of the upper above places someday,after I saving save some money.But I wonder if I should spend all the money that way---because if I do this,I won't have my own house until years later.
I want to travel a lot but I'm not able now
I want to go many places. I prefer living ("staying there" may be better) there for a while, seeing the sceneries sights, and knowing meeting some interesting people from different places.
In China, I must visit Tibet, the holy land; Guangzhou, a mix of ancient and new; and Yunnan and Jiangsu, which have many beautiful towns. There're still many other cities I want to go to ("I want to visit"), and some of them I have already been to, so I won't list them.
For foreign countries, I want to visit Japan, because I love the comics and some certain foods; the USA, because it has great movies and TV shows; and New Zealand, due to its fresh and beautiful scenery.
I will travel to all the upper above-mentioned places someday, after I saving save some money. But I wonder if I should spend all the money that way---because if I do this, I won't have my own house until years later.
Don't forget to put ONE space AFTER a comma (,) or a period (.). 你写得非常好!我希望在将来你能实现你的梦想。我也很喜欢旅行,其实下个月我和丈夫打算去广州!
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