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París
Since Two years ago, when i was 15, i traveled with my class to Parish. It was the first time I traveled in a by plane and i was excited. This travel wasn´t very expensive and we did a lot of visits to visited a lot of monuments, but the hotel was horrible! It was very far of from the center of Paris (i don´t remember the district ) , the bathroom smelt very bad, the rooms were dirty and the service were was dreadful. However the breakfast was excellent.
Parish is a great city. We visited the Eiffel tower, the Sena Seine River, Sacred Heart, and Disneyland too! Since then I love Disney films. I hope to return to Disneyland because it is a wonderful place but above all i want to return tu to Parish because it is a lovely city and in these travel we couldn´t enjoy a lot [? I think you are trying to say "on this trip we didn't get to see as much as I would have liked"?]
[I have corrected "smell" to "smelt" above, but you can also use "smelled" - one is British English, the other American English. Both are correct]
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