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My future job Tonight I want to write about my future job. I´m studying architecture and I love my degree. I`ll finish soon because I´m working on my graduation proyect now. But my employment future is uncertain... Nowadays in Spain, the work is limited. We are into an economic crisis and the architecture is very very hurt. So I´m worried about my future.. I´ll search for job on my country but if I don´t find employment in Spain, I think I´ll look job in another country. For this, it´s very importan for me to learn English. In this way, I have more possibilities to find a job. Do you think to know some lenguages are very importan to find a employment?

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Tonight I want to write about my future job. I´m I'm studying architecture and I love my degree. I`ll I'll finish soon because
I´m I'm working on my graduation proyect project (right) now. But my employment future future employment/the future of my employment is uncertain... Nowadays in Spain, the work is limited. We are into in/going through an economic crisis and the architecture is very very hurt is suffering. So I´m I'm worried about my future...
I´ll I'll search for a job on in my country but if I don´t don't find employment in Spain, I think I´ll I'll look for a job in another country. For this, it´s it's very important for me to learn English. In This way, I have more possibilities to chances of finding a job.

Do you think to that knowing some foreign lenlanguages are is very importan crucial to for finding a employment?

 

[it's always good to know another language, but architecture is universal, in my opinion]

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My future job

Tonight I want to write about my future job. I´m studying architecture and I love my degree. I`ll finish soon because I´m working on my graduation project now. But my employment future is uncertain... Nowadays in Spain, the work is limited. We are in an economic crisis and the architecture  is very very hurt. (no sé que quieres decir) So I´m worried about my future..
I´ll search for a job in my country but if I don´t find employment in Spain, I think I´ll look job in another country. Because of this, it´s very important for me to learn English. That way, I'll have more possibilities to find a job.

Do you think to know some languages are very helpful to find a job?

 

I agree 100%. Knowing Spanish in the US makes it much more likely to get a job.

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My Future Job

Tonight I want to write about my future job. I´m studying architecture and I love my degree this specialization/this area of study/it (assuming you haven't yet earned your degree). I`ll finish soon because
I´m working on my graduation project now. But my future employment future is uncertain... Nowadays in Spain, the work is limited/work is or jobs are hard to find. We are into an economic crisis and the architecture/the architecture industry is has been very very hurt/is suffering. So I´m worried about my future..
I´ll search for job in my country but if I don´t find employment in Spain, I think I´ll look for a job in another country. For this, That's why it´s very important for me to learn English. In This way, I'll have more possibilities to find/of finding a job.

Do you think to know some lenguages are knowing a language is very important to find a in finding employment?

 

Good job, Antonia!  Not much in the way of actual errors, so I focused on helping you find expressions that sounded more native, more fluid.  

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