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     Formal education methods where the teacher instructs the whole class and the students work alone are more reliable and produce better results than informal methods. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the education system in this country is steadily advancing. Students are getting online videos and tutorials and can utilize a World Wide Web where they can enhance their level of expertise (It was a fragment/not a full sentence). Internet has brought a revolution to this world.
In the past there was a tradition to follow the formal method of education.

     Teachers used to instruct the whole class and the students worked alone. However, there are certain educational institutes which are still following this teaching policy. I believe it helps students to work independently and to cope with their needs without help. As they have to do their work alone. But the other perspective believes that co-operation and group work is equally important for growth.

     This informal way of educating students is useful for increasing their area of knowledge. Informal ways of education is getting more popular in youngsters. They use internet and group work to learn and get experience. In this way they not only increase the level of expertise in their field but also get to know about the importance of teamwork. They also learn how to use other levels of knowledge in their task and utilize time and resources to produce better results.
        I don’t agree with the statement about informal ways of teaching. I believe it produces better results than the formal way because it involves a group of thinkers and innovators bringing together their way of techniques and style in order to have a better outcome. I believe it should be implemented in every school and university to bring a new future to this world.